9 - Classmate Blog Critique

 

Classmate Blog Critique

In this course my favorite Blog to view was Haven Williams. The information, videos, pictures, and style she used to incorporate her projects were outstanding. She seemed to be very comfortable with all of her projects and never seemed like any topic she had was forced even if it was. I loved the way she could be herself and not feel ashamed of the imperfects she shared with us. The confidence she hold upon herself is incredible. 

Havens' style approach never failed me. The font style, coloring, and word choice made her blogs very easily understandable and readable. Of course everyone can use a little more practice in every thing that they do, but she has a very good way of showing off her talents. Another big thing a loved about her page was that all you seen was mostly her. She has many pictures of what she does, who she is, and the impact she has on the school. It as if we almost know who she is without explanation. 

With everything she was involved in during her semester she was able to maintain the work load and produce unique topics and good claims. Even opening up her blog account look appealing. It pulled the audiences in and made them want to view her projects and see what all she was capable of creating. 

During my semester taking these courses, I learned a few things from Haven projects. The most important thing I learned from her was the use of vocabulary. I see that she uses great defined words but never over do it. You know how sometimes people can try to use a lot of big words to make them sound smart and it either makes the paper sound illiterate or boring. Her papers are never like that. They don't sound childish and they don't sound to advanced to where you are lost or confused throughout the paper. 

Haven did an outstanding job with her projects this semester and if she keeps going like she is, she could possibly win the award like Haylee Hines did.